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Come in morning,
what a warning.
Come at night,
what a fright.
Come later,
what a traitor.
Come at last,
what a blast.
Come now,
what a wow.

Come,
don't be dumb...
©2008-2009 ~Above-TheDeath
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Dont know really

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:iconshadytrader:
Hrmm sounds like sexual innuendo :D

But seriously... :D Your poems are very simplistic, they are more like what kids would read in a poem book. Try and make a more complicated poem that has stanzas or whatnot. Alliteration works very well in poetry and makes it flow, as well as same sounding words.

Try some new stuff out, make your lines longer.

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