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I awake that fateful morning,
and at last I feel a surge of warning.

I feel the signs of those around me,
and quiver at the thought being free.

I awoke that fateful morning,
and at last I felt a surge of warning.

We are imprisoned and constricted,
and yet for some reason why are we addicted.

I stand up that fateful morning,
and at last I have a surge of warning.

We break out of the black and white,
and find that we no longer need to fight.

I walked on that fateful morning,
and at last I no longer need a surge of warning.
©2008-2009 ~Above-TheDeath
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I like it, there is repetition and whatnot, the only thing i would say is that you have awake and awoke and they are very similar :P but other than that? BRAVO! :D

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